Re: More sentences

From: Charles Eicher (ceicher_at_inav.net)
Date: 06/30/04 

Date: 29 Jun 2004 21:09:01 -0700

In article <CzqEc.6187$G02.2899@newssvr27.news.prodigy.com>, necoandjeff says...
>
>"Kevin Wayne Williams" <kww.nihongo@verizon.nut> wrote in message
>news:10e4aekoi6i6se6@news.supernews.com...
>> I said I would periodically post sentences to double-check that my
>> tutoring wasn't going completely astray. Here are some more samples for
>> folks to attack:
>
>Comments on a few of them are below.
>
>> Illustrating $B$3$H$b$"$k(B
>> $B;d$O1XA0$N%i!&lt;%a%s20$G?(B?$BY$k$3$H$b$"$k!(B
>
>Kill the $B;d$O(B. The problem here is that it's not a sentence that you would
>likely say. With the $B$b(B attaching to the $B?)$Y$k$3$H(B, you are
>implying that,
>in addition to doing other things at the ramen ya, you also eat there. I
>think what you are trying to say is
>$B1XA0$N%i!&lt;%a%s20$G$b?(B?$BY$k$H$(B?$B"$(B but
>of course that isn't an example of $B$3$H$b$"$k!#(B

Shouldn't that be "..tabeta koto ga aru"...?

>
>> Illustrating $B$7$+$M$k(B
>> $B2&lt;&lt;j$J4k2h$G$b$H$i$;$l$?;D6H$O$7$+$M$k!#(B
>
>I don't follow the $B$H$i$;$i$?(B bit. I don't think it is right but I'm not
>sure what you are trying to say.
>
>> Illustrating $B$3$H$K$7$F$$$k(B
>>$B2q(B??$BR$X9T$(B??$B";d$OD(B?$BNJbF;$rJb$(B?$B^$;$s!#2q&lt;R$H2H$N4V$K$"$k>>86$K$O!">.F;(B
>>$B$,$"$j$^$9!#>>86$O4qNo$G$9$N$G!";d$O>.F;$rDL$F9T$/$3$H$K$7$F$$$k!#;~!9!"(B
>> $B@58a$K!">>NS$K$"$k>.@n$K3]$1$k@P66$GJ[Ev$r?)$Y$^$9!#(B
>
>Kill the $B;d$O(Bs. I think you need to combine a few sentences to make it a
>little more natural and changes a few of the vocabulary words but the
>$B$3$H$K(B
>$B$7$F$$$k(B bit is fine. It should be $BDL$C$F(B. What I would say is:
>
>$B2q(B??$BR$X9T$(B??$B"JbF;$rJb$(B?$B^$;$s!(B?$BJ$(B??$B$+$H$$$&amp;$H2q(B??$BR$H&lt;+Bp$N4V$K$H$C$F$be:No$J(B
>$B>>86$,$"$j$^$9$N$G!"$=$N>>86$rDL$C$F9T$/$3$H$K$7$F$$$^$9!#$=$7$F;~!9$*Ck$K$O(B
>$B$=$N>>86$rN.$l$k>.$5$$@n$rEO$k@P66$G$*J[Ev$r?)$Y$^$9!#(B
>
>Jeff
>

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