Re: Japanese homework: letter from vacations


"espritka" <espritka@xxxxxxxxx> wrote in message news:1156855687.227138.237350@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Hello,

I am a student of japanese and I have vacation homework to write a
letter from vacations :)
I wrote it, but I feel that there are still many mistakes.
Could You please help me to correct them?

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Date
Sensei he

Mainichi tenki wa kawariyasukute, (hi ga)haretari, kumottari shimasu.
(kumottari desu.)
Natsuyasumi ga owatte itte, tokarzu minna wa daigaku e kaerimasu.
( mou owarunode, toukarazu)
Sensei wa Ogenki desu ka?

Kotoshi no natsuyasumi wa totemo subarashii deshita. Watashi ga iroiro
(subarashi katta.)
na tokoro o mite, suteki na basho e ikimashita. Watashi ya boifurendo

to tomodachi to issho ni ryokou shimashita. 7gatsu 10ka kara 7gatsu
18nichi made watashitachi wa umi e ikimashita. Saisho ni Dziwnow machi
Dziwnow ?
e ikimashita. Mikkakan hamabe ni hi ni yakemashita. So*** umi de
(hamabe ni itanode yakemashita.)
oyoidari, suna no shiro o tatetari shimashita. Tokidoki yuugata wa
(tsukuttari)
kaigan ni sampo o shita koto ga arimasu.
(ni deta koto)
or (kaigan wo sampo shita koto ga arimassu(or arimashita).

Dziwnow kara Kolobrzeg made musen ryokou o shimashita. Sore wa amari
yasashikunakatta tabi desu.. Kuruma ga watashitachi ni mawarimashita.
(rakuna tabi de wa nakatta). mawarimashita?

Kurumaga watashitachi no maewo sudoori *** ikimashita.

Watashitachi wa nagai aida toori no soba ni hikitsuzuki matte imashita.
zutto toori de machitsuzuke mashita.

Kolobrzeg no machi de watashitachi wa tento ni nemashita. Tento ga
kaigan no chikaku ni 50 metoru gurai arimashita. Watashi wa hitori de
Tento wa kaigan kara 50 meetoru gurai no tokoro ni harimashita.

shokuji o tsukaranakereba narimasen deshita. Sore wa tanoshikatta desu
tsukuranakereba Soredemo tanoshikatta desu

you. So*** tenki ga totemo atatakakute, ondo wa 35oC deshita.
Natsuno hideri wa tsuzuki, kion wa 35 C nimo narimashita.

Mainichi watashitachi wa machi no chuuou e itte, kissaten de aisukurimu
o tabemashita. Kolobrzeg kara uchi made densha de kaerimashita.

Ato de, watashi wa ryoushin to ryokoushimashita. Watashitachi wa
Sono go mata,

Olsztyn no machi e ikimashita. Kono machi no naka ni sukoshi kenbutsu (o)
wo
shimashita. Demo sore wa kanashikatta tabi desu.
( why sad? 'Cause without your boyfirend?)

Suujitsugo watashi to boifurendo wa takai yama e ikimashita. Yuusu
ni nobori mashita.

hosuteru de heya ni tomemashita. Kesa, chikaku ni aru yama o nobotte,
de tomari mashita.
furui ishikiriba o mitsukemashita. Sorekara Wroclaw made kuruma de
ikimashita. Wroclaw de watashitachi wa kirei na shokubutsuen o
mimashita. Sore wa Nihon no Teien to iu no desu. Mite kara, doubutsuen
Sore wo mite kara,

e ikimashita. Asoko wa kirin to ka, zou to ka, kaba to ka, kurokodairu
Soko (ni)wa, kirin toka,

to ka, iroiro na yasei doubutsu ga arimashita. So***, ookii me ga iru
imashita (or orimashita). ookii me no

sakana mo arimashita. Ano toki no shahin wa sensei ni dashimasu.
sakana mo imashita. ( or totemo ookii sakana ga imashita ?) So toki no

shashin wa sensei ni teishutsu shimasu.

Ima watashi wa uchi ni yasunde imasu. Doko he mo ikimasen. 9gatsu ni
shiken ga aru kara, zutto nihongo o benkyoushimasu.
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Good ! Sono-choushi de ganbatte kudasai.

B. Ito



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Thank You in advance
Kasia


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