Re: "Kouya Ruten" - Song Translation - Full Version

From: Phil Yff <phil.yff@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Mon, 18 Dec 2006 12:57:25 -0500

On Wed, 6 Dec 2006 10:58:40 -0500, Phil Yff wrote:

I made a minor change in the translation of the line:

誰もが一人きり荒野を流離う

The old version was:
Everyone wanders alone in the wasteland.

The new version is:
Everyone wanders all alone in the wasteland.

'All alone' seemed to be a better choice to translate 一人きり than just
'alone.'

Phil Yff
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