Re: Way OT: A new song

Travers Naran wrote:
Sean wrote:
Here's a new song. Lyrics and other info are at soundclick at:


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=19110&songID=5180058

Please have a listen. I'd enjoy any feedback, even negative!

Warning: It's rock n roll. (Sorry for the off topic, but there are a
couple of folks in here who might be interested.)

先のベンチャーズのカバーのビデオが好きです。　（＾＿＾）

The song has a good riff. Vocals need more work -- your voices aren't
harmonizing as well as they should. Also, your recording set-up needs
some work. It sounds too echoey for my tastes.

Recorded in a concrete garage on portable gear with back up vocals
performed by drunkards. So I knew it wasn't going to be slick. I agree
with your critique.


Sorry: I tend to be far more harsh on myself and having worked on Sound
for video games. I learned to be far more anal about sound recording
from professional sound recording & design people.

One doesn't post one's song for all the world to hear if one can't take
criticism. Thanks for listening.



Other than that, it's a good song and the lyrics are amusing.


--
http://www.soundclick.com/seanholland
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