proofread pls? ^_^
- From: "moon.neko" <moon.neko@xxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2008 19:24:52 -0800 (PST)
so, i passed a translation test for oxfam japan and they sent me a
manuscript to translate. the only problem is, while with translations
of conceptual stuff it's ok to be a little bit vague or presume things
at times, to put two-and-two together. but when it's directions, i
don't have that luxury, i really want to make sure it's 100% right so
i don't send hundreds of people off to get lost in the mountains. and
i suck at directions even in english. there were a few bits i wasn't
too clear on in this translation, so i thought i'd get it double-
checked by smarter people than me, thanks ^_^
Original:
①関所通過
②車道に突き当たり右折し歩道を進む
③ホテル前を進み交差点を右折
④駐車場に突き当たり左折
⑤駐車場奥左脇から住宅エリアへ
⑥突き当たりを右折
⑦箱根旧街道(Hakone Old Trail)に入り石畳を進む
⑧車道をくぐり階段を上り直進
⑨車道に突き当たり右折し歩道を進む
⑩道の駅（Michi-no-Eki）敷地内は歩道を周回し、横断歩道を渡りハイキング道へ
⑪レストハウス（Rest House）の右裏を通過し、右手のハイキングルートへ
⑫三国山(Mt. Mikuni)、湖尻峠(Kojiri Pass)方面へ
⑬車道を横断し目の前の山道を上がる
⑭展望公園を通過、分岐を右折し、湖尻水門(Kojiri Watergate)方面へ
⑮横断歩道を渡り左折、歩道を進む
→芦ノ湖キャンプ村(Ashinoko Camping Village)がCP4
Mangled translation:
①Pass the barrier.
②Turn right at the end of the street, and continue along the footpath.
③Go past the front of the hotel, and then turn right at the
intersection.
④Enter the carpark, and turn left.
⑤From the upper-left corner of the carpark, proceed to the residential
area.
⑥At the end of the residential area, turn right.
⑦Go into the Hakone Old Trail, and continue along the stone paving.
⑧Cross the road, go up the stairs and continue going straight.
⑨Turn right at the end of the road, and continue down the footpath.
⑩When you reach “Michi no Eki”, go around the footpath, cross at the
pedestrian crossing, and head towards the hiking track.
⑪Pass the back of the Rest House on the right-hand side, towards the
right-hand Hiking Grate.
⑫Head towards the direction of Mt Mikuni and Kojiri Pass.
⑬Walk up the road via the mountain walkway in front of the crossing.
⑭Pass Tembo Park, turn right at the crossroads, towards Kojiri
Watergate.
⑮Cross at the pedestrian crossing, turn left and continue along the
footpath.
→Ashinoko Camping Village CP4
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