Re: Is there wrong sentence ? please help me..

sung wrote:

Hi.
Is there any wrong sentence in here?

Are there any wrong sentences here?

Thanks in advance..and have a good time.
Here is

"
TIM-1(Pattern processing machine) processes mold cores and stampers by

The TIM-1 (pattern processing machine) processes mold cores and stampers
by

directly tapping down with a diamond tip. It is called TIM-1and has the

[I don't know what verb to use with diamond tips, but "tapping down"
doesn't seem to be it] It has the

following advantages and disadvantages

following advantages [over the competitors? over our previous model?]:

Advantages)
1) With the super high-speed direct processing technology, the time

Super high-speed direct processing technology

required in patterning has been drastically reduced compared to etching. It requires

has drastically reduced the time required for patterning. It takes
[only?]

approximately 20 ~ 30 minutes to process 2-inch panel (32mm x 38mm).

20-30 minutes to process a 2-inch panel [1" = 2.54 cm, so 2" = 51 mm].

Therefore, compared to etching, processing time is drastically reduced.
If there already is an injection facility within the company, the time

If your company already has an injection facility, the time

required from the processing with TIM-1, injection and checking of

needed for each test -- TIM-1 processing, injection, and checking of

optical properties to the next test is reduced down to approximately

of optical properties -- is

100 minutes. Therefore, test process can be carried out without

100 minutes, so there is no limit on the number of tests that can be
performed. [??? What does the time per test have to do with their
number?]

limitation. As such, process of significantly high-quality samples can

[no idea what this last sentence intends]

be achieved in 24 hours from the commencement of pattern process.

2) The safe direct processing technology secured reproduction by 95% or
more."

[no idea what (2) intends]
--
Peter T. Daniels grammatim@xxxxxxx
.

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