Re: "Geek Gone Mad"-Opening scene
From: A_Weisman (a_weisman_at_yahoo.com)
Date: 09/30/04
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Date: 30 Sep 2004 15:41:56 -0700
Greatcod@Yahoo.com (Greatcod) wrote in message
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> The sun rose over the satellite dish on the neighbor's mobile home,
> and flooded the living room of Swegs' 1976 12 wide. His head was on
> the keyboard of his computer. He began to wake. The foam from his
lips
> had dripped into the keys during his sleep. He rubbed his eyes, put
on
> his horn-rimmed glasses, and tried to get back on-line. He
> couldn't-the spittle had frozen the keys, and paralyzed the mouse.
> He got up, and tucked his filthy T-shirt into his coffee stained
> sweatpants. He walked slowly to the windows of the 12 wide, over the
> bodies of dozens of insects that once were his pets?live healthy
> beings destroyed by his increasing neglect of anything but his
> obsession with trolling.
> At the window, he began to sob. "How could the God that makes
> creatures
> as beautiful as the Borrellia make people as repulsive as those Lyme
> Loonies?"
> He dried his eyes and reflected on his lost career. "I could
> have won the Nobel Prize. Well, maybe I could'a got nominated. I
> could'a been Somebody, I could'a been a Contender."
> He tried to think positive, like his Therapist had advised him.
> "I'll call Allen." In reality, even Allen didn't talk to him any
more.
> Then he fell into a heap, on the floor, next to his beloved little
> friends. Another day in the hellish existence of the once promising
> micro-biologist had begun.
Review: Lame, hackneyed, trite, juvenile, puerile.
Fishhead proves himself a hack yet again.
This is worse than the "poetry" of boob2221.
This is worth printing out. Best use: kindling for your next fire.
Other than that, skip it.
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