Suggested punctuation, please?

A partial thickness tear could not be ruled out, but there did not appear to
be evidence of a full-thickness rotator cuff tear; although, there most
definitely was subacromial bursitis noted in this examination.

Should I leave it this way (the way I typed it), or does someone have a
better suggestion? This is exactly as dictated, and I'm not exactly sure how
best to punctuate it.

Thanks!


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  • Re: Suggested punctuation, please?
    ... A partial thickness tear could not be ruled out, but there did not appear to ... > be evidence of a full-thickness rotator cuff tear; ... > definitely was subacromial bursitis noted in this examination. ...
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  • Re: Suggested punctuation, please?
    ... didn't know something about MT rules versus standard grammar rules, ... > Full-thickness is hyphenated but partial thickness tear is not. ... >> to be evidence of a full-thickness rotator cuff tear. ... >> most definitely was subacromial bursitis noted in this examination. ...
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