Re: Are you hungry?
I enjoyed your writing. I thought it was very well-written and it
definitely held my attention, even though I am not a big chocolate
lover, either, but I could identify with your description of each piece
of chocolate, having experienced this myself. I could almost taste the
flavors as you were describing them.
I was almost hoping in the end, when you mention the woman replacing
the lid back on the box, that perhaps she was going to discover a
secret love note inside, something from the admirer who had sent the
gift!
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Mikaela
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Relevant Pages
- Re: Ping The Little Man Upon the Stairs
... "is to write a two-thousand word essay about the effects ... and all other required writing, as a personal challenge to my ... Manhole Covers." ... Too much chocolate gives the reader a stomach ache and too ...
(rec.motorcycles) - Re: Please ignore this if you dont want to read a rant
... Cats and chocolate are the default off-topic conversation threads here and they're fine. ... But there's just too big a divide between some of us with regard to politics and religion, and that leads to flame wars which just cause ill-feeling and generate lots of heat and no light whatsoever. ... I have learned to killfile those threads, but the danger is that they attract people who just want to argue politics and who actually have no interest in writing at all. ...
(rec.arts.sf.composition) - Re: Ping The Little Man Upon the Stairs
... "is to write a two-thousand word essay about the effects ... and all other required writing, as a personal challenge to my ... Manhole Covers." ... Too much chocolate gives the reader a stomach ache and too ...
(rec.motorcycles) - Re: How/when do you know what its about?
... Perhaps it is you who feels, deep down, that writing is a luxury? ... or chocolate or biting the heads off live parrots, ...
(rec.arts.sf.composition) - Re: [WR] My big little book
... I would prefer to talk about writing, ... Stupid or lying, stupid or lying, oh me oh my... ... and chocolate, ...
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