Re: everything...

From: Dennis M. Hammes (scrawlmark_at_arvig.net)
Date: 06/13/04


Date: Sun, 13 Jun 2004 05:29:06 GMT


"A.Ansari" wrote:
>
> spinning drops of ethereal might
> playing ivory scales gives light
> murmuring songs make faces strong
> some dance alone, in pairs or more
> some dance the dance, written before
> changing tunes, make faces change
> are you real or is it lore?
> weaving time forevermore?
> chimerical orbs of omnitude
> entirety, to you allude

To achieve the proper primitive voice for a fundamentalist piece
such as this, it is going to be necessary for you to get back into
closer contact with your roots as a browser-purchaser.

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