Re: On the Nature of Exploration

From: Edward Wright (edwright2000_at_hotmail.com)
Date: 07/22/04 

Date: 22 Jul 2004 10:46:12 -0700

"Jorge R. Frank" <jrfrank@ibm-pc.borg> wrote in message news:<Xns952DECEDDCD70jrfrank@204.52.135.40>...

> > Paul Allen has funded multiple aviation projects and owns a large
> > collection of warbirds (the Heritage Flight Collection). Some of his
> > Heritage planes have competed in the Unlimited class at the Reno Air
> > Races. The notion that he's realized someone might get killed in these
> > activities is, I suggest, quite incredible.
>
> As written, that last sentence conveys the opposite meaning from what you
> probably intended. I suggest a small edit, such as substituting "he hasn't"
> for "he's."

Yes, quite. :-)

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